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Volcanoes

Learning Outcomes | Teaching and Learning | Assessment and Evaluation | Printing Version

Title: Volcanoes
Writers: Sylvia Insley and Don Benn
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Overview This unit is written for secondary English language learners to develop the skill of explaining as a scaffold to NZ Curriculum science learning area achievement objectives. It focuses on building topic-specific vocabulary through listening and speaking.

Learning Outcomes

(What do my students need to learn?)

What are my students’ current strengths and learning needs?

Use previous assessments (e.g. vocabulary levels tests, ESOL unit standards, oral language assessments) alongside The English Language Learning Progressions (ELLP) oral language matrix to establish the level at which students are working and their current strengths and needs. The unit includes activities designed to ascertain what learners already know about the topic. Tasks in the Science Assessment Resource Bank (ARB) could also be used for this purpose.

Curriculum Links Assessment Links
Learning area: English (ESOL)

Summative assessment:

Students explain how a volcano works using a cross-section model

Students could be assessed formatively or summatively using the following ESOL unit standards:

Unit standard 27991: Participate in simple spoken exchanges on personal and familiar topics (expired)

Unit standard 28022: Demonstrate understanding of simple spoken information on familiar topics (expired)

Unit standard 28052: Demonstrate understanding of detailed spoken instructions (expired)

Focus: Oral language 

English: Listening and Speaking

AO L4:

Purposes and audiences

Show an increasing understanding of how to shape text for different purposes and audiences.

Language features

Uses a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects

English Language Learning Progressions:

Students will be working at ELLP stage 2, towards stage 3.

English Language Intensive Programme:

The language features and text complexity focused on relate most closely to ELIP stage 2.

Learning area achievement objectives:

Science: Planet Earth and Beyond

AO L5: Investigate the composition, structure, and features of the geosphere.

Students could be formatively assessed for formatively using the following science ARB tasks related to volcanoes and volcanic eruptions:

PE 8009 (L3)

Completing a diagram of a volcano

PE 8027 (L3)

Observing the stages of a volcanic eruption

PE 7564 (L5)

Describing aspects of a volcanic eruption

PE 8520 (L5)

Describing signs and geological events linked to volcanic eruptions

PE 8528 (L5)

Explaining ash fall depths and related problems

Summative assessment:

Students explain how a volcano works using a cross-section model

Key Competencies: all five with particular emphasis on:

Using language, symbols and text: to interpret and use specialised words to access and communicate scientific explanations

Thinking: to develop understanding, construct knowledge and reflect on their own learning

Specific Learning Outcomes:

Students will be able to:

  • identify the parts of a volcano
  • explain the structure of a volcano
  • explain the processes of a volcanic eruption
  • explain how convection currents work
  • identify some volcanic or igneous rocks
Language learning outcomes

Key vocabulary:

ash, a cone, to cool, the core, a crater, crystals, the earth's crust, to erupt, lava, magma, magma chamber, the mantle, molten, rocks, vent, volcano

Text features of explanations:

Structure:

logical sequencing classification / description followed by explanatory sequence

Language:

general nouns and noun phrases e.g.

timeless present tense e.g. cools, burn,

relating verbs e.g. is, has

action verbs e.g. heats, flows

passive voice e.g. is forced

cohesive devices including conjunctions showing cause /effect (e.g. because, as a result, so ), temporal relationships (e.g. first, when, then, finally)

See also:

Features of text forms: Explanations

ELIP stage 2 sample explanation genre texts with language features annotated:

‘The Life Cycle of a Grasshopper’ 8(c); ‘The Beginning of Digestion’ 8(d); ‘The Water Cycle’ 14(c) ; ‘The Formation of Fossils’ 14(d)

For more complex sample explanation texts see ELIP stage 3:

Aluminium Recycling’ 3(c);‘ How do Hurricanes and Tornadoes Occur?’ 8(c) or ‘The Life Cycle of Ants’ 8(d)

Suggested Duration 3 - 4 weeks

Teaching and Learning

(What do I need to know and do?)

Teacher background reading:

Knapp, P. & Watkins, M. (2005) Genre, Text, Grammar. Sydney: University of NSW

The genre of explaining , pages 125-152

NZ Curriculum Exemplars: Transactional Writing: Explanations

Schoenbach, R.et al (2003) Apprenticing Adolescents to reading in Subject Area Classrooms Phi Delta Kappan pages 133-138

Some teaching and learning resources:

Learning task 1

Learning task 2

Learning task 3

Learning task 4

Assessment and Evaluation

 (What is the impact of my teaching and learning?)

Summative Assessment

Assessment Task:

Students explain how a volcano works using their model – or Powerpoint slide - as a demonstration prop. This assessment can be done as a formal presentation or in a conversational setting with a partner asking questions to guide the explanation, but each student is assessed individually. All explanations must be recorded on DVD. Assessment schedule requirements must be clearly explained to students prior to summative assessment. Note that this task could be differentiated for groups or classes by the inclusion or non-inclusion of labels on the volcano cross-section.

See the assessment task (Word 28KB) and schedule (Word 34KB) .

Reflection

The teacher can view selected DVD explanations with the class to provide feedback / feedforward for students.

Printing this unit:

If you are not able to access the zipped files, please download the following individual files:

Learning task 1

Expected time frame: 1-2 lessons

Teaching and learning purposes

These learning activities are designed to activate the prior knowledge and lexis of students and to extend their topic-specific vocabulary. A number of collaborative oral and reading vocabulary activities are included to give students many opportunities to use key vocabulary in different ways.

ESOL US 2986 v7 performance criterion addressed:

1.4 The meaning of essential vocabulary as used in each text is given.

Ensuring learners know the content and language learning outcomes

  • Share the learning outcomes, including language learning outcomes, with your students, for example:
    • I know some keywords about Antarctica

Activating prior knowledge

  • Brainstorming. Ask students to individually brainstorm words about the topic, in their first language (L1) or English, and write them in a list.
  • Ask students to share their brainstormed words with a partner. Each student ticks a word s/he already has or adds that word to her/his list.

Giving learners many opportunities to first notice then use new language

Pre-teaching key vocabulary

  • Write the Keywords (Word 21KB) for this section on the board and ask the students to identify and talk about the words they recognise and also add the key words they don't have to their lists.
  • Say the key words and ask students to imitate.
  • Say the words. Students tick each word as they hear them (two ticks if the words are repeated.)
  • Say the words and ask students to mark the syllables and stress on their lists. This needs to be taught if the students do not already know how to do this.
  • Demonstrate the meanings of the words using pictures. For guidance see  https://www.teachingenglish.org.uk/article/presenting-vocabulary
  • Syllables Spelling Jumble (Word 20KB). Ask students to work by themselves sounding out the syllables and putting them back together. They check their pronunciation with a partner.
  • Put the students into groups of 3 - 4. Distribute a set of pictures and cut-up words to each group, or a set of Words and Definitions (Word 63KB) for students match up. Alternatively, students can find their own words from their lists to write on each picture.
  • Ask each student to make a sentence with one of the words. Monitor this activity to check correct usage.
  • The students paste the pictures into their books. Under or next to each picture they write a sentence describing the picture. Teachers can add other pictures as needed.

Reviewing key vocabulary

The following strategies can be used to revise the keywords at any stage in the unit or - in some cases - set as homework.

  • Whispering game: Divide the class into teams. Give the last person in each team a word. When the teacher says "Go", the last student whispers the word to the one in front and so on until the first in line has the word and runs up to the board and writes it. The first team with the correctly spelt word on the board gets a point. At the end the students are able to see the whole list on the board again.
  • Vocabulary Jeopardy: Write new words on the board in jumbled order. Dictate the definition or show a picture. The students write down the words in the correct order.
  • Antarctica Extra Vocabulary Tasks (RTF 1MB). These include a collocations chart, a cline and a word cluster.

Principle 6 Ensure a balance between receptive and productive language

Principle 6

Ensure a balance between receptive and productive language.

Are the students using both productive (speaking, writing) and receptive (listening, reading) language in this lesson?

Primary level: Year 5–6 social studies

Secondary level: Year 11 English

Useful teaching strategies to support Principle 6

Running dictation

A running dictation gets students out of their seats and engages reading, writing, listening, and speaking skills. It can be used in a variety of contexts, one example is for reinforcing those “little” words (e.g. helping verbs, articles) that are sometimes overlooked by students.

Set-up: Prepare a short text (3–5 sentences) that incorporates the target grammar. You can also use an excerpt from the textbook that contains the grammar point. Print a copy in a 16-point font for easy reading. Place the text at the front of the room. It remains there throughout the activity. (For larger classes, you may need 3–5 copies placed around the room.)

Groups: Students can work in pairs or threes. One person is the designated writer. The other partner is the runner. They can only read and speak. (If you have groups of three, the two non-writers take turns being the runner.)

Action: When time starts, one runner from each group “runs” to the front and memorises as much text as possible. He or she then returns to the writer and reports what was read. The writer writes. This continues until the text is complete.

Rules: The students should try to reproduce the text exactly – including correct spelling and punctuation. With advanced groups, fine points like italics, parentheses, or other features must be accurate. The first group to finish with a correct text is the winner.

Review: After everyone finishes, pass out copies of the text. Student can check their work, note the target grammar structure, and do a follow-up activity.

Teaching Inquiry: Planning to meet student needs

How can literacy learning needs be addressed in the teaching and learning programme?

  • Videos to support developing literacy leadership and effective literacy teaching practice across all learning areas. These videos provide brief summaries of the different stages of the inquiry undertaken by Mt Albert Grammar in 2011 as a result of its involvement in the project.

How does research inform my inquiry?

How will progress be monitored?

Your inquiry will determine the ways in which progress should be monitored. For example, you may decide to monitor progress through student writing, oral responses, research skills and/or presentations.

Need help from your colleagues? Join the Secondary Literacy mailing list .

Teaching Inquiry: Planning to meet student needs

How can literacy learning needs be addressed in the teaching and learning programme?

Examples from Practice - Science Year 10 - Supporting students to read and select relevant information within a research project.

How does research inform my inquiry?

  • Teaching Science through Literacy: An article by Cynthia Shanahan, from Adolescent Literacy Research and Practice, Edited by Tamara L. Jetton and Janice A. Dole (2004) Guildford Press.

How will progress be monitored?

Your inquiry will determine the ways in which progress should be monitored. For example, you may decide to monitor progress through student writing, oral responses, research skills and/or presentations.

Need help from your colleagues? Join the Secondary Literacy mailing list.

Teaching Inquiry: Planning to meet student needs

How can literacy learning needs be addressed in the teaching and learning programme?

  • Videos to support developing literacy leadership and effective literacy teaching practice across all learning areas. These videos provide brief summaries of the different stages of the inquiry undertaken by Mt Albert Grammar in 2011 as a result of its involvement in the project.
  • The Guidelines for Effective Adolescent Literacy Instruction provide teachers with a framework for literacy inquiry and outlines the principles of effective literacy instruction.
  • Earth Under Pressure A unit of work for Year 10 combining Science, Social Studies and English learning outcomes. This unit exemplifies how literacy learning can be addressed in the context of each learning area.
  • Making Language and Learning Work 2: Integrating Language and Learning in Secondary English and Social Science is a DVD that shows how teachers can effectively integrate content-area teaching and language learning. Copies of this DVD were sent to schools and further copies can be obtained from Down the Back of the ChairFacilitation Notes accompany the DVD.
  • Units/lesson sequences based on English (and other) curriculum objectives, designed or re-designed for English language learners.

How does research inform my inquiry?

How will progress be monitored?

Your inquiry will determine the ways in which progress should be monitored. For example, you may decide to monitor progress through student writing, oral responses, research skills and/or presentations.

Need help from your colleagues? Join the Secondary Literacy mailing list.

Visualise this

Learning Outcomes | Teaching and Learning | Assessment and Evaluation | Learning Inquiry | Printing Version

Writers: Claire Amos and Hamish Chalmers
Curriculum Level: NCEA Level 2
Year Level: 12-13
Who are my learners and what do they already know? See  Planning using Inquiry

Learning Outcomes

(What do my students need to learn?)

How your school’s principles, values, or priorities will be developed through this unit
Curriculum achievement objectives (AOs) for:  
English

Level Seven:

Speaking, writing, and presenting

Processes and strategies

Students will:
Integrate sources of information, processes, and strategies purposefully, confidently and precisely to identify, form, and express increasingly sophisticated ideas.

By using these processes and strategies when speaking, writing, or presenting, students will:

Purposes and audiences
Show a discriminating understanding of how to shape texts for different audiences and purposes.

Ideas
Select, develop, and communicate sustained ideas on a range of topics.

Language features
Select and integrate a range of language features appropriately for a variety of effects.

Structure
Organise texts, using a range of appropriate, coherent and effective structures.

(Indicators have been removed from the above)

Achievement Standard(s) aligned to AO(s) 2.6 Create a Visual Text

Teaching and Learning

(What do I need to know and do to meet the range of identified learning needs of my students?)

Professional readings and relevant research

Effective Practices in Teaching Writing in NZ Secondary Schools 

Planning 

English Teaching and Learning Guide 

Assessment and Examination Rules and Procedures

Resourcing

This resource has been designed for students with access to computers both for designing the visual text and to view the video tutorials.

The planning templates in this resource link to google doc files and are also included in hard copy.

Learning task 1 - Deconstruction of visual text
Learning task 2 - From written text to visual text

Assessment and Evaluation

(What is the impact of my teaching and learning?)

Learning task 3 - Examine an exemplar
Learning task 4 - Choosing a themes focus
Learning task 5 - Including all the meaning (3-level guides)
Learning task 6 - A progression of ideas
Learning task 7 - Planning the panels
Learning task 8 - Sound and voice-over
Learning task 9 - Decide on the best tools

Learning Inquiry

This section includes questions that may aid teachers when reflecting on the students’ learning from this unit.
 

  1.  What do the students' choices around visual language techniques show about their understanding of how techniques can be used to effect audience?
  2.  What do the students' choices around visual language techniques show about their understanding of how effects can be utilised to communicate and develop ideas?
  3. What does the range of ideas students have communicated show about their understanding of what constitutes sustained ideas?
  4.  What do the students' choices around structural visual techniques (such as ordering, layout, and proportion) show about their understanding of how shaping texts communicates meaning?
  5.  How can the students’ understandings from this unit be linked to other units of work?

References:

Three Level Guide References

If you are not able to access the zipped files, please download the following individual files:

Deconstructing a visual text (Word 33KB)

Deconstructing a written text (Word 32KB)

Annotation for the exemplar (Word 33KB)

Planning a visual text (Word 42KB)

Planning a progression of ideas (Word 49KB)

The Deer Hunter assessment booklet (Word 67KB)

Storyboard template (Word 30KB)

Please contact Hamish Chalmers for any feedback or suggested changes.

Learning task 1: Introductory lesson

Context: reading varied poems

The teacher presents the class with a large variety of poems (at least 1 for each student).

Suggested poems

A mixture of old and new, with different emphases (rhythm, rhyme, free verse, sound, image ...) works best. Some that have worked well are:

  • The Railings - Roger McGough
     
  • The Tiger - William Blake
     
  • The Soldier - Rupert Brooke
     
  • Metaphors - Sylvia Plath
     
  • Witches' Speech (Double double ..) from Macbeth
     
  • This is Just to Say - William Carlos Williams
     
  • Miss World - Benjamin Zephaniah
     
  • The Bus - Charles Gillespie
     
  • Sky Diver - Roger McGough
     
  • For Heidi with Blue Hair - Fleur Adcock
     
  • Advice to a Discarded Lover - Fleur Adcock
     
  • Chance Meeting - Reimke Ensing
     
  • How to Eat a Poem - Eve Merriam
     
  • I Waited All Day - Pearl Jam (Vitalogy album)
     
  • Dissection - Colin Rowbotham
     
  • Ozymandias - Percy Bysshe Shelley
     
  • Excerpts from Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock and The Hollow Men - T.S. Eliot
     
  • A Birthday - Christina Rossetti
     
  • A Poetic Definition - Christopher Morley
     
  • Coal Fire - Louis Untermyer
     
  • Poem About Writing a Poem - Eric Finney
     
  • Pigtail - Tadeusz Rozewicz - trans. Adam Czerniawski
     
  • Vegetarians - Roger McGough
     
  • Declining the Naked Horse - Bill Manhire
     
  • Rain - Hone Tuwhare
     
  • Jabberwocky - Lewis Carroll
     
  • High Flight - John Magee
     

 

But also see the following sites which contain many poems:

The students spend time browsing through the poems, pausing to read any that appeal at first glance (a full understanding is not necessary - instead, the student should look for sounds, images or patterns that appeal).

Students focus on a poem or part of a poem that they particularly like. They share the poem and their reasons for liking it with a partner.

Volunteer students share their poem and reasons for its appeal with the class.

The teacher leads the students through the various ways a poem makes its appeal - eg. sound, rhyme, pattern, image, narrative, rhythm. At some stage it may be useful to revisit the use of images with these ARB resources:

  • Personification (ARB username and password required to view this resource)
  • Metaphors (ARB username and password required to view this resource)

The students take a copy of their poem. Underneath it, they write why they like it.

For close reading of other poems, see these ARB resources:

Prescription (ARB username and password required to view this resource)

I'm Home (ARB username and password required to view this resource)

Parcel (ARB username and password required to view this resource)

Sea-dog (ARB username and password required to view this resource)

Learning to Read (ARB username and password required to view this resource)

Special Holiday Attraction (ARB username and password required to view this resource)

For drawing inferences from poems, refer to Assessment Resource Bank resources (key word search - inference/poetry).




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