Close read instructional/procedural texts to the students.
Assessment Resource Bank activity:
How to Make a Plaster Mask
Provide opportunities to discover the differences and the similarities between explanations and instructions:
Focus attention on the need to add reasons when writing an explanation. Together list the language and text features that will be the focus for later writing.
Set up a vivarium for student observation. Students use a magnifying glass to observe spiders and write a brief explanation of their observations. Discuss how the vivarium may help to find answers to our questions: What we want to find out about spiders.
Collect, observe and make notes on changes for several days.
Outside the Classroom (this could be a homework activity for a week). The students keep a record of the number of different spiders they see.
Shared reading - read and discuss how the spider uses a web to catch prey.
Discuss different types of webs and how different spiders catch their prey. Discuss how camouflage helps spiders catch their prey and also helps them hide from their enemies.
Teacher models writing an explanation: "How a spider catches its prey". Teacher introduces the
explanation_checklist (RTF 16KB)
Students identify the checklist points using the teacher modelled writing.
Teacher models how to use a flowchart or cluster diagram, organising ideas into sequential order, thinking carefully how to start and end the explanation. Model how to select the best and most relevant ideas. Ask students for ideas, encouraging them to participate in the modelling process. Talk about the audience for their writing. Who will read it? How will this affect your planning?
Read How does a spider use its venom?
Discuss:
Students complete venom activity.
Using the explanation model students brainstorm and plan an explanation: "How a spider uses its venom"
Students plan and write their draft explanation and with a peer use the explanation checklist. Students
peer_conferencing (RTF 21KB)
with each other, commenting on and questioning each other's explanation.
Published on: 26 May 2009