Feedback guide
Read your partner’s draft. Give them feedback on these aspects of their writing:
Ideas and structure
- What events take place?
- What feelings and thoughts are linked to these events? Give two specific examples.
- What is the timeframe for this narrative?
- the writer reinforce a particular mood at the end?
Style
- Can you identify effective or unusual details?
- Is the narrative written in the past or present tense?
- Which point of view is used? (eg: Is the narrative told in the first or third person?)
- Is the use of tense and point of view effective?
Next steps
- What are the strengths of this narrative?
- What suggestions can you make to improve it?
Published on: 23 Nov 2010
